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I'm confused, he's on his own seemingly, but at the moment of realization it's 'more than two', so I assumed that the moment of bliss was, for instance, when you ...

Well, I have to say that I think this is a real improvement on chapter 1/1.5, not that I didn't enjoy 1/1.5, but this was a real joy to read ...

Hey Annii, I thought the story was pretty good, what you seem to be attempting can be quite tricky, merging the real world with the fantastic, or perhaps the divide ...

Hello, So firstly I'd like to apologize for not reviewing grammar but I'm pretty dreadful at it so I think I'll leave it to people more qualified than myself. The ...

before I cam back but now should be 'came' I didn't notice any other major grammar issues. In terms of the general writing style I think it can come across ...

Hey, To be honest I thought that this piece didn't really go anywhere. Don't take this as too much of a criticism because it was well written and I wanted ...

It's well written and you get across character which is pretty much all you can do with only 500 words. I'll try and see if I can help you to ...

Hello, first off here's a couple of things I notice in the world will end with world . I think this should be "will end THE world" but it seems ...

First off, hello, I tend not to do grammar and the like because I don't naturally notice it and I don't really enjoy going over the piece reading it looking ...

I liked it, it felt like a rollicking adventure. It was fast paced and it just threw us into the story, no long explantions or incredibly awkward lines. Only criticism ...

Hello Waywardbird. First thing I have to say is that I both love and hate the first couple of paragraphs. Truthfully I think it's overwritten, but I love trying to ...

The bullet whirled I Think this is a bad word for a bit, implies a spinning motion instead of the straight forward movement of a bullet through the air at ...

Hello, I realized I'd read this but not reviewed it. So here goes I stole subtle things from various stores the same way I had at the first So firstly ...

How do, Hope, happiness and love. What are these words? I have already forgotten them feels a bit teen emo in my opinion, All that I saw are trees and ...

Hello Alpha, To answer the questions in order: Yes, it most certainly was OK, in fact better than OK it was good. Atmospheric and controlled. Familiar and yet not cliched ...